Read this slowly to get the insights of an Egoist!!
I patch
just to tear
I befriend
only for fear
I agree
just to break
I freeze
just to crack
I sense
but never feel
I fall in love
but never faint
I sketch
and never paint
I think
but never dream
I link
but never attach
I mind trade
and never the dealings
I have emotions,
but no empathic feelings
Never a sharpener,
but always a good shredder
In this life, full of trade-offs,
I am certainly, a very smart trader!!
Tried to portray the increasing ego, with the metres, as the poem progresses.
--sudharm baxi (my creation but not me!!)
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It's been long since i have gone missing from the blogworld. But i am back
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11 years ago
8 comments:
impressive......
your tow lines
"I sketch
and never paint"
touched my hart a lot...
Thanks for writing
This is decent enough!!!
@Lokesh,
@Ajey,
Glad that you liked it.
indeed u r a smart trader!!!
@niket,
As i mentioned, the protagonist of the poem is not me, it is just coming through me man..
Sudharm,
I like the the way this poem was written. I have always been a big fan of opposites/contrasts used in the lines of a poem.
Z
PS. I am also following you. Ajey aka Brosreview follows pretty good writers/poets!
Thank you for visiting my blog.
Z
@Zorlone,
Thanks, tried to imbibe those feelings in the simplest yet deepest sense. Tried..
and ur tries have gone too far than just an amateur attempt...
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