Monday, January 12, 2009

Kill Me ! ! ! !

People say
Don’t stop things in between
Then why you leave me half alive

Kill me
I’m already half dead
Kill me
I am terribly sad

Kill me
I carry my dad’s ambition
Kill me
I say no to addiction

Kill me
I dare to speak
Kill me
My moral doesn’t leak

Kill me
I refuse to bribe
Kill me
I don’t belong to your tribe

Kill me
I abhor plagiarism
Kill me
I adore patriotism

Kill me
Please please kill me

Before I create my own paws
And start tearing and bending the laws

Before I find pleasure in cocaine
And my dad’s ambition utterly insane….

Kill me!!!


deburn said...

Gud 1 dude..!!

niket said...

This is the inside of every person in this world in one or the other way...
You wrote on behalf of every one that makes this poem a perfect one.....

James Parker said...

Hidden up above,
In your work of desperation
Are the key words, "half alive",
which should give you inspiration

The world holds many sorrows,
I'm sad to have to say.
But I cannot let that blind me
To the joys that come my way.

Sometimes its hare, but strive to be happy............

sudharm baxi said...


thanks for the pick..
that half alive thing
keeps most of us alive..

in these meshy shadowy
woods this ray of hope
urges us to thrive..

prompts us evokes us
to leave the darkness and
take a wonderful dive..

thanks again!!

Every Photo Tells A Story said...

Sudharm: It's a relief, sometimes, to express your deepest feelings. Thank you for sharing your very emotional writing. And, I hope this will no longer be your wish ever again.


sudharm baxi said...

yeah Nancy,

This was like hitting a wall in order to get my negative energies flow out..

But there are better ways and i am certainly trying a few, one of them is Meditation..

Every Photo Tells A Story said...
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Every Photo Tells A Story said...

Yes, Sudharm, meditation, like writing is a great way to relieve stress, clear your thoughts, gather new strength, AND, purge negative energy. Good for you!

P.S. Thank you for posting your link on my blog!


maglomaniac said...

we always dread the already dead
so as not to die,
but most of us are
dead by now


sudharm baxi said...

Very true Harsha..

Brosreview said...

You could polish this furthermore. However, the frustration is quite clear. Keep it up!!!

sudharm baxi said...

Infact Ajey,

i have been procrastinating on that, i too sincerely want to refine it and beautify it more..Soon would do.

Thanks for the advice..

Viji said...

Kill me!! sudhar the frustration and helplessness has come out very well..little polishing is what it needs... isn't it wonderful to write about something and vent our anger???

sudharm baxi said...


First of all, thanks for dropping by..
And certainly yes, one can use up all the negative energy within by, writing/working upon such a piece.