Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Acrostic 180409

Another Acrostic, consider it to be a slogan for a fictional social networking site called 'OPPORTUNITY'!!

O
penness is good, but it

Promotes
Perversion and plagiarism, hence
Offer only
Restricted
Thoughts and
Upload only
Necessary
Information,
Thank
You!!

--sudharm baxi

14 comments:

Brosreview said...

So very true!!! Your, let's say, definition is quite appropriate in today's world Sudharm. And, the way you've ended it is quite polite. Good job!!! Keep them coming!!!

maglomaniac said...

Man I am impressed by the variety you search.
Keeps me excited when I see the diff prompts that you discover.
I too am feeling like trying my hand.
Nice 1

sudharm baxi said...

@Ajey,
@Harsha,

New attempts keep that small thing up there ticking, hence all such attempts, glad that you enjoyed it.

Amias said...

This is interesting. You are good at the confinement of acrostic. Using few words and saying a lot.

I will link this so others can read it too ... Thanks for leaving a link.

sudharm baxi said...

@Amias,
Thanks for the kind words!!

anthonynorth said...

A lot of truth in that.

americanising desi said...

hey that was infectious :)

Tan said...

Sudharam,
Your name is very good... bahot achha hai ..

The basic Idea of writing an Acrostic is to carry the meaning of the word throughout the poem... I think that lacks in this poem of yours... I would suggest you to keep writing a few more to master the art... Also, I'm taking up a workshop to know/learn how to write Good Acrostics. If you want, you may contact Amias and join in the fun too...

Keep writing :)

sudharm baxi said...

@anthony,
@american desi,
Thanks..

@Tan,
Thanks, but you spelled it wrong, it is Sudharm, and yes i would surely join the workshop, thanks for the same..

Ofira Sephiroth said...

lmao...oh I love this.

sudharm baxi said...

@Ofira,
Pleased that you liked it.

Leo said...

beautiful write! :)

sudharm baxi said...

@Leo,
Thanks :)

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Is this possible?