Another Acrostic, consider it to be a slogan for a fictional social networking site called 'OPPORTUNITY'!!
Openness is good, but it
Promotes
Perversion and plagiarism, hence
Offer only
Restricted
Thoughts and
Upload only
Necessary
Information,
Thank
You!!
--sudharm baxi
I am back!!
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It's been long since i have gone missing from the blogworld. But i am back
and back with a bang.
11 years ago
14 comments:
So very true!!! Your, let's say, definition is quite appropriate in today's world Sudharm. And, the way you've ended it is quite polite. Good job!!! Keep them coming!!!
Man I am impressed by the variety you search.
Keeps me excited when I see the diff prompts that you discover.
I too am feeling like trying my hand.
Nice 1
@Ajey,
@Harsha,
New attempts keep that small thing up there ticking, hence all such attempts, glad that you enjoyed it.
This is interesting. You are good at the confinement of acrostic. Using few words and saying a lot.
I will link this so others can read it too ... Thanks for leaving a link.
@Amias,
Thanks for the kind words!!
A lot of truth in that.
hey that was infectious :)
Sudharam,
Your name is very good... bahot achha hai ..
The basic Idea of writing an Acrostic is to carry the meaning of the word throughout the poem... I think that lacks in this poem of yours... I would suggest you to keep writing a few more to master the art... Also, I'm taking up a workshop to know/learn how to write Good Acrostics. If you want, you may contact Amias and join in the fun too...
Keep writing :)
@anthony,
@american desi,
Thanks..
@Tan,
Thanks, but you spelled it wrong, it is Sudharm, and yes i would surely join the workshop, thanks for the same..
lmao...oh I love this.
@Ofira,
Pleased that you liked it.
beautiful write! :)
@Leo,
Thanks :)
I would like to exchange links with your site baxiwrites.blogspot.com
Is this possible?
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