Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Friendship

An attempt at acrostic , inspired by Acrostic Only


Fun filled summers at

Riverside camps

Interesting relations with

Endearing romance

Never ending affection and

Deathly departures

Strongly felt love glued with

Hearty enthusiasm

Intermingled favors, all

Packaged as a gift called


FRIENDSHIP


--sudharm baxi

Previous immature pieces on similar topic at Friends indeed and Friends.


11 comments:

Amias said...

Welcome to Acrostic Only.

This is very good ...!

sudharm baxi said...

Thanks Amias for dropping by, and i admire your site immensely, superbly maintained!!

Brosreview said...

Yes, I agree, this is good. Very good!!! Keep them coming!!!

sudharm baxi said...

@Ajey,
Thanks a lot..

anthonynorth said...

An excellent feelgood poem.

Nave said...

Good stuff mate :)

Maggie said...

This was a warm loving acrostic and I enjoyed reading it.

sudharm baxi said...

@anthony,
@nave,
@maggie,

Thanks a bunch!!

americanising desi said...

ahh what positive vibes :)

Ofira Sephiroth said...

The first six lines are powerful.

sudharm baxi said...

@american desi,
Thank you.

@Ofira,
Thanks and yes could not really retain the charm till the end.