Thursday, March 5, 2009

My darling talk to me!!

This is in respone to a beautiful photo by Vanessa at a fantastic blog..

Oh my love
where have you gone?

leaving me all alone with
the never ending mourn

i still long for our talks
i still long for your laugh

i have always felt
we have never had enough

there were places
to explore..
dreams
to share ..
castles
to make ..
dogmas
to break ..

Come back
Come back my love

or else ..

for whom shall i find the best food
for whom shall i learn culinary

for whom shall i pick my pen now
for whom shall i write poetry

You have never been in my arms
the way you are today

Why your body is so cold
why don't you ask me to hold

why don't you grumble
about being hungry ..
why don't you complain that
i am always angry ..

Oh darling shout at me
change my attitude
alter my dressing
improve my eating habits

do something darling
do something
move a little
shake a bit
for God's sake
darling talk to me
talk to me....
.
.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

so hart touching........and showing maturity of d author.........keep it up......u r going good

manoj chhangani said...

very well written....very touchy....i am fan of urs from today.....

manoj chhangani said...

very well written....very touchy....i am fan of urs from today.....

Vee said...

that was beautiful...tugged at my heart strings...

Every Photo Tells A Story said...

This has to be a personal piece, Sudharm because it is so emotional and real.

sudharm baxi said...

@ Lokesh, Manoj, Vanessa, Every Photo..

Thanks a lot for dropping by..