tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post5864292883276717834..comments2023-05-16T19:53:55.167+05:30Comments on My Authorings!!: Ohh son!!sudharm baxihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-40470918375882813752009-04-02T18:37:00.000+05:302009-04-02T18:37:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-60587022128921091562009-03-31T17:17:00.000+05:302009-03-31T17:17:00.000+05:30Too be frank Ajey, I don't actually know poetry ru...Too be frank Ajey, <BR/><BR/>I don't actually know poetry rules, just one thing i know that my poems should convey my feelings as rhymingly as possible and not at be blamed verbose..<BR/><BR/>But i am learning various poetry styles just to be more technically sound (again the word 'technically' can't actually convey my exact expressions).<BR/><BR/>Thanks for all..sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-20034672325419365732009-03-31T16:20:00.000+05:302009-03-31T16:20:00.000+05:30Well done!!! This is quite emotional mate. It is g...Well done!!! This is quite emotional mate. It is great to know someone else thinks along the same lines too. <BR/><BR/>Great sentiments pouring out of this great piece. I love the simplicity in structure and lines as well. You have not even attempted to stick by the rules of poetry. And, in that attempt you have successfully managed to let your feelings out so well. Cheers to you!!!<BR/><BR/>I write so as I have come across numerous ones who get so carried away by abiding by rules and regulations that they completely compromise on feelings, the very essence of poetry. <BR/><BR/>Keep writing!!!<BR/><BR/>On that note, check out my song, "My forgotten heroes". It is on the same lines as this one, sort of.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-56789674570814382142009-03-25T10:35:00.000+05:302009-03-25T10:35:00.000+05:30@manoj,True, words can never convey the feelings, ...@manoj,<BR/><BR/>True, words can never convey the feelings, the pain inflicted upon..sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-12810152401394638312009-03-24T23:08:00.000+05:302009-03-24T23:08:00.000+05:30man...this is truly awesme...really touched my hea...man...this is truly awesme...really touched my heart....<BR/><BR/>what a mother feels....cannot be imagined but..your effort was truly appreciablemanoj chhanganihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15160266736282859189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-90936408131892496202009-03-23T11:07:00.000+05:302009-03-23T11:07:00.000+05:30@Tumblewords,Families are infact devastated, but t...@Tumblewords,<BR/>Families are infact devastated, but the feeling of pride keeps them alive.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for dropping by..sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-33678365710492743192009-03-21T23:22:00.000+05:302009-03-21T23:22:00.000+05:30Nicely done - people tend to forget the families b...Nicely done - people tend to forget the families broken by war. Good reminder - well writtenTumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-56520331220709720182009-03-19T11:21:00.000+05:302009-03-19T11:21:00.000+05:30@niket thanks a lot for the kind words..@niket <BR/>thanks a lot for the kind words..sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-56972950754941600012009-03-18T22:33:00.000+05:302009-03-18T22:33:00.000+05:30Well baxi..... a great writer in making.... waitin...Well baxi..... a great writer in making.... waiting for the day when u will dedicate a book to me..... hahhahahaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04199975798693840465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-1280760702148807322009-03-18T22:32:00.000+05:302009-03-18T22:32:00.000+05:30Really boss soul touching lines!!..Patriotic man a...Really boss soul touching lines!!..<BR/><BR/>Patriotic man and a father to a soldier son... neither want to looose motherland nor his son...<BR/><BR/>You poured the hearts of those who lost their son in WARS throughout the history...<BR/><BR/>This is the truth which will never change ever after thousand years from now... the father flet this and continue to feel the same...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04199975798693840465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-45541540089695891042009-03-17T10:41:00.000+05:302009-03-17T10:41:00.000+05:30@ Deba Thanks man!!@ James Thanks a lot for droppi...@ Deba <BR/><BR/>Thanks man!!<BR/><BR/>@ James <BR/><BR/>Thanks a lot for dropping by and all the kind words, i too adore and admire your works immensely.<BR/><BR/>thanks again and i would sincerely look into what you have mentioned.sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-53244414803616259302009-03-16T21:35:00.000+05:302009-03-16T21:35:00.000+05:30I am shedding tears while writing this...it is bea...I am shedding tears while writing this...it is beautiful beyond description. I will come back many times and revisit this. And your other works. I was surprised when I saw I was not on your follower list. I am now. Sudharm, thank you so much for your comment on EPTAS...it allowed me to incorporate 10 "blog hugs" into one piece. And, while I'm here, I invite you to take a couple of photos of some cute kids in India and submit them to Windows to the Words Photo. Once again, a beautiful and moving piece.James Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14780546357335117813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-24179804317507857392009-03-16T20:33:00.000+05:302009-03-16T20:33:00.000+05:30One of the best poem i have seen from you..keep it...One of the best poem i have seen from you..keep it coming dude...!!!Debashish Mukherjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01744112689085468689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-143765091917217452009-03-13T14:19:00.000+05:302009-03-13T14:19:00.000+05:30@ Vipul, Jeeves,Thanks a lot for dropping by..@ Lo...@ Vipul, Jeeves,<BR/><BR/>Thanks a lot for dropping by..<BR/><BR/>@ Lokesh,<BR/>Very true, the amalgamated feeling of pain and pride is what keeps the family of the martyr going!!sudharm baxihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05267161615281216261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-47099977573453138252009-03-13T13:59:00.000+05:302009-03-13T13:59:00.000+05:30In this poem we are able to see the feelings of a ...In this poem we are able to see the feelings of a father whose son give up his life for his motherland. For father this moment is a mixture of great pain and proud and this is shown in this poem so truly . <BR/><BR/>gr8 ...........Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-7638923747729678442009-03-13T13:58:00.000+05:302009-03-13T13:58:00.000+05:30Very nice one.Very nice one.Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178504788637824284.post-33146598359063813592009-03-13T13:39:00.000+05:302009-03-13T13:39:00.000+05:30This one is the best of all till now .What a creat...This one is the best of all till now .<BR/>What a creation !!!!!!!!!1<BR/>Hats off to youAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com